Life
Will anybody love me
Anybody at all?
Life
Don't let me down
Help find the women of my dreams
Will anybody love me
Anybody at all?
Life
Don't let me suffer
Find a caring women for me
Will anybody love me
Anybody at all?
Life
Don't keep me single
Find me someone to love
Will anybody love me
Anybody at all?
Will anybody love me
Anybody at all?
Life
Don't let me down
Help find the women of my dreams
Will anybody love me
Anybody at all?
Life
Don't let me suffer
Find a caring women for me
Will anybody love me
Anybody at all?
Life
Don't keep me single
Find me someone to love
Will anybody love me
Anybody at all?
3 comments:
Jonzo, you asked for comment so I thought I'd post my thoughts. I think that's the strongest two pieces of verse you have written, although the word 'bonk' and the ideology behind it kindof ruins it imho. That's a disturbing philosophy that claims to 'deserve' a girlfriend. I understand your situation and desperation but believe me, having a girlfriend 'for the sake of having one' is not the answer. Ask yourself whether it is a girlfriend you seek, or whether there is someone in particular you love with every fibre of your being. Let me know the answer if you want to, if you want to keep it to yourself then fair enough.
Jonzo, you invited comment, so I shall give it. These two are the strongest two pieces of verse you have written, however, the use of the word 'bonk' ruins 'Life' somewhat. I'm not sure I see how anyone can 'deserve' a girlfriend? I understand what you are going through in terms of loneliness and desperation, but it is not enough to demand that someone fall into your lap. Ask yourself this, you can tell me the answer or keep it to yourself, but do you want 'a' girlfriend, or do you love someone with every fibre of your being? Like I said, you don't have to answer, but just think about that.
Jonzo, you invited comment, so I shall give it. These two are the strongest two pieces of verse you have written, however, the use of the word 'bonk' ruins 'Life' somewhat. I'm not sure I see how anyone can 'deserve' a girlfriend? I understand what you are going through in terms of loneliness and desperation, but it is not enough to demand that someone fall into your lap. Ask yourself this, you can tell me the answer or keep it to yourself, but do you want 'a' girlfriend, or do you love someone with every fibre of your being? Like I said, you don't have to answer, but just think about that.
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